Thread:IronspeedKnight/@comment-233389-20170322142346/@comment-7154338-20170328142720

Advice, you should use the small picture icons used in the main wiki's dialogue page, or at the very least fully type out the name of the characters every time with either a bold or italic setting to differentiate from the dialogue text.

The reason is that not only is it more visually pleasing and less confusing, but shows more effort and a sense of quality.

Amount the writing itself, it's very exposition heavy without a trace of character in Juggernaut. Juggernaut has a distinct personality and voice. Other than the mentioning of "Cyttork", there's nothing in his dialogue that fits his character.

You got the personality of Iron Man and Coulson right (although I would personally have removed the last "Mr. Stark", just seems like an overkill). I'm guessing that's because you're much more familiar with those characters because of the MCU and such.

http://avengersalliance.wikia.com/wiki/Juggernaut/Dialogues

Here's some of Juggernaut's dialogue scenes. Reading that, you would notice the level of slang he uses in conversations.