Thread:Loupi/@comment-27816990-20160512140747/@comment-27816990-20160527141315

I've been writing, and the brother role for Riley morphed into another cousin character. I also changed some stuff about Riley. And I know you're more of a comic than a script person, but I stuck with script :/ because its waaay easier. Plus, I made it to look like those books that don't have pictures in it (but kept the narration like a normal person, npt like a robot telling the story) so I just hope you like it lol.

I'll try to link you to a short part of the story if I have time.